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Re: Liars
Hey, Vampirewolf3! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer for today. ^_^ In the far corner of the onyx Club Capitalize Onyx. his cold one This just bothers me. You ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Is this any good?
Is that the romance story you posted with the twins? Because I found myself thinking that they seemed a bit too close. If so, you've done a good job portraying ...
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Re: Bane
erased as of 11-8
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
7/10... I don't know what the first quote is from... and the second one is an inside joke I guess.
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Christmas Magic
Hey, Rosey! Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. The grass was covered by a pitiful amount of snow, especially for mid-December. I agree with AshleyLee, this could ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: I Don't Know
Konnichiwa, Otto-kun! I don't know why this has happened I lower my head and my face has saddened The "saddened" part sounds like you were just desperate for a rhyme ...
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Re: Blood
Hey, KaityJay! Welcome to YWS! My critique is in bold. Blood i fell to the ground... Capitalize I paralyzed by the pain. cant anyone help me? Remember the apostrophe: It ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: A Mind-Boggling Malady: Dystonic Reaction
Hey, Voxina! First, let me say you are very brave. I know that doesn't help you, but I just wanted to say that. I'm sure a lot of people can ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: an anime drawing
Hey, Foxfire! Nice drawing, all in all. Profiles are so hard to draw, aren't they? I've been practicing... but I will never post my art here. Too scared to. :D ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: hihihi
Hey there, Sam... Ophelia? I had to comment because I saw your username and thought, "Shakespeare!" Hamlet is amazing. As are cats. I have two myself, one is special ed ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: A Prayer Answered.
Hey, Bianca Fanatic (sorry, I have the need to grammatically correct everyone's user names.) I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ 10 or 15 minutes. Always spell out ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Everyone keeps beating me to the nit-picks today! *grumbles* Oh well. There are only a few things I want to say. -It really bugs me how the twins refer to ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Invisible Chapter1
Nooooooo! R Gallagher already reviewed the nit-picks! That is my favorite thing to review! *pouts* Oh well. I guess I'll review it in general. General Review -Okay, pretend your parents ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: If Only I'd Seen
Hey, Rhode! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer for today. ^_^ Like RGhallager said, you should have two review of others work before you post your own work. Thanks! ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Short, normal weight. Rosy cheeks and bright green eyes. Brown or dirty blond hair.
Jan 19, 2009
