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Antigone Cadmus

  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Liars

    Hey, Vampirewolf3! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer for today. ^_^ In the far corner of the onyx Club Capitalize Onyx. his cold one This just bothers me. You ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Is this any good?

    Is that the romance story you posted with the twins? Because I found myself thinking that they seemed a bit too close. If so, you've done a good job portraying ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Bane

    erased as of 11-8

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    7/10... I don't know what the first quote is from... and the second one is an inside joke I guess.

    Jan 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Christmas Magic

    Hey, Rosey! Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. The grass was covered by a pitiful amount of snow, especially for mid-December. I agree with AshleyLee, this could ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Don't Know

    Konnichiwa, Otto-kun! I don't know why this has happened I lower my head and my face has saddened The "saddened" part sounds like you were just desperate for a rhyme ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blood

    Hey, KaityJay! Welcome to YWS! My critique is in bold. Blood i fell to the ground... Capitalize I paralyzed by the pain. cant anyone help me? Remember the apostrophe: It ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • General Articles Re: A Mind-Boggling Malady: Dystonic Reaction

    Hey, Voxina! First, let me say you are very brave. I know that doesn't help you, but I just wanted to say that. I'm sure a lot of people can ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: an anime drawing

    Hey, Foxfire! Nice drawing, all in all. Profiles are so hard to draw, aren't they? I've been practicing... but I will never post my art here. Too scared to. :D ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: hihihi

    Hey there, Sam... Ophelia? I had to comment because I saw your username and thought, "Shakespeare!" Hamlet is amazing. As are cats. I have two myself, one is special ed ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Prayer Answered.

    Hey, Bianca Fanatic (sorry, I have the need to grammatically correct everyone's user names.) I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ 10 or 15 minutes. Always spell out ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forbidden Love

    Everyone keeps beating me to the nit-picks today! *grumbles* Oh well. There are only a few things I want to say. -It really bugs me how the twins refer to ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Invisible Chapter1

    Nooooooo! R Gallagher already reviewed the nit-picks! That is my favorite thing to review! *pouts* Oh well. I guess I'll review it in general. General Review -Okay, pretend your parents ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: If Only I'd Seen

    Hey, Rhode! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer for today. ^_^ Like RGhallager said, you should have two review of others work before you post your own work. Thanks! ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar

    Short, normal weight. Rosy cheeks and bright green eyes. Brown or dirty blond hair.

    Jan 19, 2009


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